Hi Friends! I am so excited to share this blog post with you. It’s from my friend Peg and I think you’re going to enjoy it. Plus. . .there are some potential gifts in it for you! Read on. . .
The Metamorphosis of a Novel
by Peggy Blann Phifer
It started out in Milwaukee. The title: Totally Tori. Victoria (Tori) Summers, a graduate of a highly-respected music school (think Julliard), is married to the heir of a Milwaukee banker with a number of branches throughout the county. Her in-laws don’t like her. A big blow-up with her husband, Justin, ends with him demanding a legal separation. With nowhere to go (no family left), Tori’s best friend, Maggie, gives her the keys to a summer retreat in northern Wisconsin, so Tori and Kaz, her Siamese cat, go north where she meets the local forest ranger, Clay Buchanan. But then Tori learns that Justin has died as a result of a brain tumor and that he sent her away, not because he didn’t love her, he didn’t want her to suffer through his illness.
I had trouble bringing everything together at that point. I’d gotten myself in way over my head. But I stubbornly stuck with part of the premise and changed the title to A Time to Heal based on Ecclesiastes 3. I dropped the separation and brain tumor and changed it into unwanted divorce because it had happened to me. But it had been too many years since I lived in either Milwaukee or northern Wisconsin and I couldn’t make it work.
So, time for a change of scenery. Realizing I could not make this book realistic, I moved the story location to Vegas. Tori became Roni (Veronica) and the title was now A New Sunrise. And Clay was hired by Roni’s mother-in-law to try to dig up some dirt in her life so Roni’s husband, Justin, would put her out of his life. That didn’t work for me because, in my heart, I knew these two had a past and I really had trouble writing them as strangers. Weird, but true.
Then things settled into place—sort of—and Roni became Erin, the working title was Sunrise tomorrow, and this time her husband, Justin, dies in a tragic boating accident intended to kill her, too. Here we meet Larke, Erin’s sister, and John, later to become Doug, Erin’s father-in-law, and Maggie, from Totally Tori, returns to the story with a new spelling of her name, Magie. (You’ll have to read the book to find out about that.) J And, of course, Kaz, the cat.
Now things are taking shape. But I still had problems with the boat accident/murder. I couldn’t figure out how to make it happen believably, and there would have been a huge investigation into it and I had no idea what that would involve. I didn’t have the research knowledge or resources I have now that would have helped me through that part.
Anyway, that, too, was abandoned. The “sun” part of the title stuck with me. I still needed Justin to die and leave Erin pregnant. And I needed to bring Clay “back” into her life after Justin’s death with a ‘past’ between them to reckon with. I came up with To See the Sun after some intense brainstorming, both on my own just rattling off stuff on an open Word document, and with a few friends who believed in me and the evolving final story.
All three books in the Desert Faith series consist of one of the senses and one of the elements: See, sun; Hear, wind; Taste, rain.
You can read the back cover blurb and the first chapter of To See the Sun at: http://peggyblannphifer.com/my_books.htm
Thanks, Joy, for giving me the opportunity to share this long, arduous, frustrating, but rewarding journey.
And now, for the fun part! Follow the steps in the exact order as outlined below:
- 1. Go to my interview of Joy’s book Your Life, a Legacy on the Whispers in Purple blog at http://www.whispersinpurple.com/2012/02/your-life-legacy-by-joy-dekok-and-fun.html
- 2. Follow the directions at the bottom of that post. (There are two steps to that.)
- 3. Keeping what you’ve discovered and created, come back here and choose one sentence from this article where your newly created word will fit, rewrite it and put it in the comments section below.
- 4. Be sure to include your name and email information (i.e. yourname [at] yourdomain/server [dot] com/net/org) in order to qualify. Confirmed followers of Joy’s blog get one extra entry. Confirmed followers of my blog (www.whispersinpurple.com) will get an additional entry. That’s three chances to win.
OKAY, win what?
- A free copy, either paperback or download, of my new release To See the Sun.
- A free copy of Joy’s new eBook, Your Life, A Legacy.
- A sterling silver necklace with heart and diamond.
- A set of Joy’s Jot Books
- A copy of Joy’s novel, Rain Dance
There will be at least one more blog to check for another part of the word game and an additional prize.
So, when will the winner be announced?
Good question. When this scavenger hunt is over. Probably before the month’s end. Keep in mind: Each of the blog sites outlines above, if you’ve left a comment and played the game, add entries to your total tally. Only one entry per blog unless otherwise stated.
Physical items available only to the lower 48 contiguous United States. E-book/s open to anyone.
Peg
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